LOVER'S TIFF
I fought with my sweetheart
fought with her for a full hour
now we both feel light
fought with her for a full hour
now we both feel light
posted by vichchoobhai at 4:54 AM
Saturday, November 11, 2006
About Me
- Name: vichchoobhai
- Location: mumbai, Maharashtra, India
cool guy, fun loving, make friends quickly and keep them happy. love travelling and meeting people
4 Comments:
nice!
these are my faltering attempts at haiku
Nothing nice about them
Thanks anyway, sis
Oye,
Hahahahahahaahahaa!Kya amazing poetry liktha hai tu! Bahut Mazaa Aayaa.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!
- Tina
Tina Joke mat karo yaar. I know how poor i am in writing poems. I was trying my hand at Haiko 5 - 7 - 5 syllables.
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